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Treason And Triumph
By Bonnie Toews

Two women spies expose the betrayal of Churchill's secret mission to stop Hitler from producing the first atomic bomb. This suspense novel is based on true events.

Bonnie Toews proves herself a master of surprises for readers trying to guess the outcome of this brilliant novel.
--Sharon Galligar Chance, BookBrowser
Five Stars

"Treason & Triumph" by gifted storyteller Bonnie Toews is an amazing war time tale of patriotism, espionage, strength and courage.
--Victoria Taylor Murray, author of "Thief of Hearts"
Five Stars

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Victoria R. Tarrani, Editor
Click on my picture to contact me for special author services.

About me: ...I write a lot of reviews, edit professionally, and work with writers in various stages of their book development stages. I edit technical, fiction, non-fiction, business proposals, and answer RFPs. 

CREDENTIALS:
Freelance editor/writer; published in various journals, magazines, and books; award winner for both story and poetry. Associate editor--three years with ABC Editing. Technical and business solutions technical and business solutions analyst and writer for Inacom Information Systems--three years.  Bachelor of Science Computer Information Science. English minor, emphasis in writing and editing.

FIRST TIME CLIENT SERVICES:

I provide 10-page edits free of charge for first time clients.

I'll do a line edit, then return it to you with changes marked. I use Word 98 to track changes. If you don't, then I'll send a *.rtf file; if your processor will save as rtf, that will help with consistency.

If you want to use my editing services, and if I think I can help you, then we will work out a fee. I do not take on clients whom I do not think I have the right expertise to help. If I don't think I can help you, then I'll give you the names of other editors who may meet your requirements.

REFERRALS FROM BONNIE'S WEB SITE: Ask about specials.

To contact me for editorial services, please click on my photo aboveand remember to fill in the subject heading of your request: FREE EDIT, BONNIE REFERRAL, TITLE OF YOUR PIECE.
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Victoria R. Tarrani
CONTACT: viki@pacbell.net

EDITORIAL SERVICES

RATES:
Line edit...$2.50 per page
Line edit of previously submitted and rewritten mss...$1.50 per page
Proof read fully edited mss...$1.00 per page
Ghost Writing...$7.50 per pg.
Manuscript Rewriting...$45.00 per hour
Manuscript Evaluation Report...$175.00

Substantive, reorganization, content and presentation 
development, or document critique; 
includes research...$45.00 per hour  -- non-technical
                               $60.00 per hour  -- business, project, and technical.
Corporate profile and interviews...$45.00 per hour
Develop marketing plan...$45.00 per hour
Advertisements...$25.00 per hour

Additional pricing structure for alternate projects including graphic arts and cover design available.
Phone consultation...No charge
Book review..............No charge
    Caveat:This is by request.  If I do not think I can review your book in a timely manner, or due to     personal issues and preferences, I will let you know.  Upon agreement, provide book. 
 

PAYMENT STRUCTURE:
Technical retainer fee-- 
   Initial 1/3 projected fee upon agreement.  1/3 mid-way through the process.  Final 1/3 upon completion.
Fiction-- 
   Initial 1/4 retainer fee; 1/4 at mid-point; 1/4 during last segment; 1/4 upon completion.
Alternate payment plans available upon agreement.
International Electronic transfer.
 

ELECTRONIC SUBMISSIONS:
Electronic files preferred in *.doc and *.rtf format.  The cost of postage is a significant factor, particularly for international clients.  I will edit the mss hardcopy if that is your preference.  Additional postage fees will be charged.

FREE SAMPLE EDIT PROVIDED: 
YES...5-10 pages; occasionally I will ask for more.  I prefer the first chapter to see if the hook works as well.  If a chapter is only eight pages long, it is sometimes better to just send those eight pages -- this also allows me to check the hooks.  

SERVICES AVAILABLE: 
Editing, graphic artist, writer, columnist, ghost writing, customized cards, book reviews.  I may contact agents as we work on your book; you will be apprised of agent's interest.

I reserve the right to reject projects.  If a project is terminated, fees will be adjusted and monies returned for unfinished segments.

TESTIMONIAL(s): 

I have had the pleasure to work with Victoria Tarrani both professionally and creatively, and cannot say enough good things about both her writing and editing professionalism.  She is a wonderfully talented writer, and an educated and proficient editor.  I have personally seen her assist other writers to the point where they have been able to go on to publishing credit(s).  She is encouraging, precise, and dedicated.  Add to that the fact that she is always truly excited to be able to help writers achieve their goals, and you have a force to be reckoned with.

I think Viki is an asset to any writing endeavor, and that her talents have proven to be invaluable to many writers already.  She is certain to continue that trend in the future.
---Tracy E. Blair
Owner / Senior Editor, ABC Editing Services

You could not ask for a better editor.  She is tough, she is thorough, and she will make you a better writer if you give her the chance.  I recommend Viki highly.
 ---Brian Knight, author of DRAGON FLY
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We have a dynamite editor in our group.  Viki Tarrani's book reviews appear first in our group and then at amazon.com, but I can vouch for her editing services and heartily recommend her.  More than being an excellent editor, Viki knows what is selling and what book editors and agents are looking for, so she can steer you to produce not only your best work but also how to attract the attention of the people that can make your publishing dreams come true.  Every author needs an editor, especially if you are serious about publishing your work.  I am handing over all my manuscripts as I finish them to Viki to edit before I submit them to agents and publishers. Editing is a profession to Viki, not a job. For others, it is merely a job. That's a significant difference, and why I am proud to have her as my editor.
  ---Bonnie Toews, author of TREASON & TRIUMPH
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Viki Tarrani has been working with me on my manuscript, and has given me invaluable advice.  Her suggestions have proven to be tremendously beneficial, and have been offered in a tone/attitude that has inspired me greatly.  She has a special knack for motivating writers.  Thank you Viki.
  ---Judy Mathis

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